Blog #6 Writing about a place

The river has one of the most perfect views that I have ever seen, next to the river the grass is neat and its greenish color makes it look like a paradise. The little cascade at the end it gives you a touch of how nature can be beautiful. The flowers are neat and precious, the fallen petals make it more attractive. What inspired me to write about this place is that it was one of my favorite when I was growing up. When I go back in my imagination to this place it brings me memories of my childhood. When I was like seven years old I used to run to that place every single day. I found myself connected to nature you could also see the bright sun coming down; a sunset at that time was precious. I didn’t find myself including any dialogue because it was more a descriptive place and I did add dialogue when I used to go and hang out with my friends.  I thought it was a good idea to add any kind of dialogue, what I try doing was getting words that the reader could actually picture how this place is. Since it is not here, the place is located in another country most of them wouldn’t know what I am talking about. I try to put myself in the shoes of the reader and try to imagine how this place can be described so the reader could understand. I did revise my paper by proof reading it and using the spell check. Also what is good it trying to reading it aloud so you can analyze if it makes sense.